March 08, 2011

5 sunrays - haiku

5 sunrays
traversing space
to enter my coffee

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5 sunrays
- no names mentioned -
1 for each finger

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5 sunrays
shaping a blackbird
better than I could

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5 sunrays
blinding a truckdriver
killing a deer

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5 sunrays
pushing a shiny jetplane -
it carries world peace

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on the edge
of a visiting night -
5 sunrays

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3 comments:

  1. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)10 March 2011 at 00:13

    Very interesting!

    The blackbird-haiku is my favourite haiku but I like the others too (especially the coffee-haiku and the truckdriver-haiku)

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

    (haiku_shelf on twitter)

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  2. Joanne Chantelau10 March 2011 at 04:34

    Absolutely lovely.

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  3. CSR23 March 2011 at 14:33

    yes... the sun shines on everything and everyone... it meets us where we are!

    i like!

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